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My personal answer (came straight from me)
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My personal answer (came straight from me)

Every evening
I think of death,
I think of all my sufferings,
I agree with the recklessness.

Because I never knew it would hurt,
To be treated like an animal,
I feel like i am being pierced
By a sharp unhealthy knife.

So I wanted to clear my head,
I took an old dictionary all folded,
I flipped through the pages quickly
And I stumbled on the word suicide ...

I though for awhile what it truly meant to me
If that was really how i wanted to be
Did i really want to end up like my sister
Was i really finished with this fight?

I finally told the man in my head no this is not me
This is not who i want to be !!!!

After all this battling i was proud of me for listening to my heart
when it called my name
to follow it

forever and always sadness

27-08-2011 10:37 PM
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RE: My personal answer (came straight from me)

Hi Sadness,

Another really good poem. I like this one even more because of the positive message in it, and the positive ending. That's the best way to deal with it all- recognize what you really want through everything, and that your attitude and actions can very much change your situation! Your thinking and reflection, even through all the confusion you experience, will really help you. Once you know the path you want to take, you can figure out how to make it happen and follow it.

Keep writing your poems, and if you can, keep posting them here. I really do like reading them- they're helpful to me sometimes Smile And I'm sure other people too, not to mention probably helpful to you.

Take care sadness, hope to talk to you soon,

- Joce

28-08-2011 04:01 PM
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