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titlesss - Sadnesstakes - 18-11-2011 02:57 AM

i can not take this pain
i can not take this sorrow
i can not take this pain
untill tomorrow

i just can not take it anymore
this life has never shine
this life was never mine
and refuse to eat another eatmore

no happy in this world
only sad
i know i am always being bad
i must stop living here in this twirl

RE: titlesss - Joce - 19-11-2011 03:45 AM

Sadness, you never cease to amaze me with the poems. I'm not kidding about that, or just saying that. This is really good, it has such good flow and word choice, but its the meaning that really makes it great. Always a help to me and I'm sure others to read.

Sad to hear thats how you're feeling, but a good poem.

- Joce